We have been talking about intent ('positive' or 'negative') and intensity (high or low) in writing.
Here are some great examples that came out of our class discussion of adjectives that make the intent AND intensity clear.
The first smile is positive intent, low intensity
The second smile is positive intent, high intensity
The third smile is negative intent, high intensity
I am looking forward to reading more creative writing from 9LDO that shows deliberate word choices for sharper sentences.
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